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Post by gizmo2015 on Jan 5, 2016 15:41:04 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2016 15:57:41 GMT -6
First: that's it, John! Show him you're not afraid!
Just a question:
If everyone knows Gordon and Marilyn Claw are criminals, especially with murder as one of the crimes, why has no one reported them?
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 5, 2016 17:42:49 GMT -6
First: that's it, John! Show him you're not afraid! Just a question: If everyone knows Gordon and Marilyn Claw are criminals, especially with murder as one of the crimes, why has no one reported them? It's explained on the chapter, but I'll explain again. If someone tries to call the police to guilt them, George might give them the news before it happens, and then they murder the person who did it.
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 5, 2016 17:46:15 GMT -6
Sixth Chapter on!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2016 18:07:05 GMT -6
First: that's it, John! Show him you're not afraid! Just a question: If everyone knows Gordon and Marilyn Claw are criminals, especially with murder as one of the crimes, why has no one reported them? It's explained on the chapter, but I'll explain again. If someone tries to call the police to guilt them, George might give them the news before it happens, and then they murder the person who did it. If it's common knowledge, how does the police not already know?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 5, 2016 18:10:58 GMT -6
Oh, man, things are spiraling right into woobie territory, aren't they. No wonder the poor inspector is in such a depressed mood.
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 5, 2016 18:16:31 GMT -6
Oh, man, things are spiraling right into woobie territory, aren't they. No wonder the poor inspector is in such a depressed mood. Yeah And let me tell you this, I cried all the shit out while I was writing this chapter.
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Post by gizmo2015 on Jan 5, 2016 18:20:20 GMT -6
I am reading it now.
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 5, 2016 18:26:27 GMT -6
Good luck with the tears
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Post by gizmo2015 on Jan 5, 2016 18:27:34 GMT -6
..I won't give the spoiler, still very sad indeed.
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 6, 2016 11:42:35 GMT -6
Seventh Chapter done!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 6, 2016 12:17:50 GMT -6
Poor guy. At least things are looking a bit up in this chapter.
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Post by PolarStar on Jan 6, 2016 12:19:34 GMT -6
Poor guy. At least things are looking a bit up in this chapter. Yes.
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Post by gizmo2015 on Jan 6, 2016 12:45:50 GMT -6
After having fun writing my first fan fiction "Gadget in Wonderland" I decided to write another one But this one will be a little more realistic and dramatic, by trying to tell an idea that I have of Gadget's past. I'll put the chapters here. IntroductionI II III IV V VI VIII will look at that now Enjoy the reading
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Post by Systemcat on Jan 6, 2016 18:32:04 GMT -6
( Since everyone else is ahead of me in reading this, I don't want spoilers and read what they wrote. ) I just got through chapter 2. George is Doctor Claw, right?
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