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Post by Systemcat on May 6, 2019 12:31:34 GMT -6
New character design!!!! Keeping the theme of making hated characters (*Cough*Capeman*Cough*) a little more likable. Or at least trying. I present to you, Kayla! Yes based on Penny's friend in the Netflix series. In here she is a young talkshow hostess for the show, Super Late. She is your typical 2070s-80s chick. Has about 5 jobs, blames anyone over 60 for the worlds problems and not serving in the last war and lusts for middle aged men! She also loves dinosaurs and cyborgs. Well there she is! I didn't even realize she was a hated character. I just sort of considered her a background character even if she was sometimes prominent with Penny. I think you wrote a little more about her here than on DA. It sounds like you've fleshed out your take on her quite a bit. Just a guess but she is going to interview Gadget on Super Late? Also Ynnep48, I don't want you to feel discouraged here with how slow posts feel lately for people giving feedback. I've come to think of this place as having tidal shifts. Right now it's at low tide for daily activity but I'm sure that will change.
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Post by ynnep48 on May 6, 2019 21:59:39 GMT -6
New character design!!!! Keeping the theme of making hated characters (*Cough*Capeman*Cough*) a little more likable. Or at least trying. I present to you, Kayla! Yes based on Penny's friend in the Netflix series. In here she is a young talkshow hostess for the show, Super Late. She is your typical 2070s-80s chick. Has about 5 jobs, blames anyone over 60 for the worlds problems and not serving in the last war and lusts for middle aged men! She also loves dinosaurs and cyborgs. Well there she is! I didn't even realize she was a hated character. I just sort of considered her a background character even if she was sometimes prominent with Penny. I think you wrote a little more about her here than on DA. It sounds like you've fleshed out your take on her quite a bit. Just a guess but she is going to interview Gadget on Super Late? Also Ynnep48, I don't want you to feel discouraged here with how slow posts feel lately for people giving feedback. I've come to think of this place as having tidal shifts. Right now it's at low tide for daily activity but I'm sure that will change. Yup yup! She is going to interview him and make him very uncomfortable. Working on a comic of that now. I personally love fleshing out background characters like this. Same with Capeman. And nah ya good. I just try not to spam up the tides with garbage. Posting claw next!
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Post by ynnep48 on May 6, 2019 22:14:18 GMT -6
Here is is!! The man, the myth, the mothaf*cka! Doctor Claw! Real name an identity suppressed. As a young man he rose to fame in the MMA profession until an accident took his arm. A peplacement prosthetic helped him finish off his career as he pursued a new one. Sports Medicine. He attained his doctorate, got rich and designed his own fully cybernetic arm. Then he vanished. Other people became the faces of his company. Many, many faces. None of them hisown. Hope yall like my take on Doctor Claw!
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Post by Deleted on May 7, 2019 12:42:12 GMT -6
Here is is!! The man, the myth, the mothaf*cka! Doctor Claw! Real name an identity suppressed. As a young man he rose to fame in the MMA profession until an accident took his arm. A peplacement prosthetic helped him finish off his career as he pursued a new one. Sports Medicine. He attained his doctorate, got rich and designed his own fully cybernetic arm. Then he vanished. Other people became the faces of his company. Many, many faces. None of them hisown. Hope yall like my take on Doctor Claw! Love it! he looks so bad A**! same with Madcat.
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Post by Systemcat on May 11, 2019 17:07:45 GMT -6
Here is is!! The man, the myth, the mothaf*cka! Doctor Claw! Real name an identity suppressed. As a young man he rose to fame in the MMA profession until an accident took his arm. A peplacement prosthetic helped him finish off his career as he pursued a new one. Sports Medicine. He attained his doctorate, got rich and designed his own fully cybernetic arm. Then he vanished. Other people became the faces of his company. Many, many faces. None of them hisown. Hope yall like my take on Doctor Claw! It's summaries like that which make me eager to read the comic pages when they come out for more details . How are you going to deal with concealing his face all the time? What the cartoons did? Keep it forever shadowed? I tackled this with a hat and scarf but yours doesn't have those.
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Post by ynnep48 on May 12, 2019 3:28:59 GMT -6
Here is is!! The man, the myth, the mothaf*cka! Doctor Claw! Real name an identity suppressed. As a young man he rose to fame in the MMA profession until an accident took his arm. A peplacement prosthetic helped him finish off his career as he pursued a new one. Sports Medicine. He attained his doctorate, got rich and designed his own fully cybernetic arm. Then he vanished. Other people became the faces of his company. Many, many faces. None of them hisown. Hope yall like my take on Doctor Claw! It's summaries like that which make me eager to read the comic pages when they come out for more details . How are you going to deal with concealing his face all the time? What the cartoons did? Keep it forever shadowed? I tackled this with a hat and scarf but yours doesn't have those. Glad you asked! We will never see his face. Always a shadow, angle or even a word bubble. People seeing him in person will sometimes see it but never seem to remember it well enough. Even when he's unobstructed and on camera. He has a device that will blur his face like on this pic. Even if you see his face and live he is still faceless. ;p
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Post by ynnep48 on Jun 7, 2019 18:15:24 GMT -6
NEW BATCH OF NOTES! Thingsstarted as a silly doodle that became official notes for the comics. I tried to keep it as spoiler free as I could. Anywho this is how Corporal Capeman fully came into their lives. So uhhhh Capeman Cometh! Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 That's all for now. I think I'm finally getting used to my new Samsung touch tablet. The art is starting to look more like how I draw on paper. Hope y'all like it!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2019 6:04:54 GMT -6
NEW BATCH OF NOTES! Thingsstarted as a silly doodle that became official notes for the comics. I tried to keep it as spoiler free as I could. Anywho this is how Corporal Capeman fully came into their lives. So uhhhh Capeman Cometh! Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 That's all for now. I think I'm finally getting used to my new Samsung touch tablet. The art is starting to look more like how I draw on paper. Hope y'all like it! Lol! I remember when you showed me some of these on our tumblr chat, I'm glad to see your finished work on here. I love the end part! Lol!
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Post by ynnep48 on Jun 8, 2019 12:51:52 GMT -6
Lol! I remember when you showed me some of these on our tumblr chat, I'm glad to see your finished work on here. I love the end part! Lol! Yeah Brain don't play that shiz. Neither does the rest of the family.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2019 19:18:39 GMT -6
Lol! I remember when you showed me some of these on our tumblr chat, I'm glad to see your finished work on here. I love the end part! Lol! Yeah Brain don't play that shiz. Neither does the rest of the family. Nope! bye bye capeman's bike! lol!
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Post by ynnep48 on Jun 9, 2019 0:36:49 GMT -6
Yeah Brain don't play that shiz. Neither does the rest of the family. Nope! bye bye capeman's bike! lol! This dog has wire cutters and knows how to use em!
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Post by Systemcat on Jun 10, 2019 8:53:01 GMT -6
NEW BATCH OF NOTES! Thingsstarted as a silly doodle that became official notes for the comics. I tried to keep it as spoiler free as I could. Anywho this is how Corporal Capeman fully came into their lives. So uhhhh Capeman Cometh! Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 That's all for now. I think I'm finally getting used to my new Samsung touch tablet. The art is starting to look more like how I draw on paper. Hope y'all like it! These pages come across to me as looking more defined than your earlier pages. .. Either that or I need to go back and look at them again. .. It's been a long morning so far. ( Looked at again the art for this you've posted here. This does look more defined .) ( ... I wish I could drink coffee. ) Hmm, so much for what I suspected was coming. I thought your Capeman was going to be a flat out villain. Jackass is the description I'd more link to this one beyond a very tainted ( wrong ) view of law enforcement.
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 10, 2019 9:36:20 GMT -6
NEW BATCH OF NOTES! Thingsstarted as a silly doodle that became official notes for the comics. I tried to keep it as spoiler free as I could. Anywho this is how Corporal Capeman fully came into their lives. So uhhhh Capeman Cometh! Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 That's all for now. I think I'm finally getting used to my new Samsung touch tablet. The art is starting to look more like how I draw on paper. Hope y'all like it! Now 'why' the hell couldn't Capeman been more like 'THIS' in the original series?? Damn! I would have LOVED him!! Anyhow...'this' was just beautiful! I enjoyed it faaaaaar too greatly! The ending was simply the best! Gadget and Brain had me freaking rolling!! I always said Capeman was nuts!!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 10, 2019 10:05:56 GMT -6
NEW BATCH OF NOTES! Thingsstarted as a silly doodle that became official notes for the comics. I tried to keep it as spoiler free as I could. Anywho this is how Corporal Capeman fully came into their lives. So uhhhh Capeman Cometh! Page 1 Page 2 Page 3 Page 4 That's all for now. I think I'm finally getting used to my new Samsung touch tablet. The art is starting to look more like how I draw on paper. Hope y'all like it! Now 'why' the hell couldn't Capeman been more like 'THIS' in the original series?? Damn! I would have LOVED him!! Anyhow...'this' was just beautiful! I enjoyed it faaaaaar too greatly! The ending was simply the best! Gadget and Brain had me freaking rolling!! I always said Capeman was nuts!! Lol! I wish that too! it would've made the 2nd season more hilarious if Capeman was like this! Annoying but Bad!
BTW ynnep48 , Lil Jon playing in the background is a nice touch.
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Post by ynnep48 on Jun 10, 2019 20:23:22 GMT -6
These pages come across to me as looking more defined than your earlier pages. .. Either that or I need to go back and look at them again. .. It's been a long morning so far. ( Looked at again the art for this you've posted here. This does look more defined .) ( ... I wish I could drink coffee. ) Hmm, so much for what I suspected was coming. I thought your Capeman was going to be a flat out villain. Jackass is the description I'd more link to this one beyond a very tainted ( wrong ) view of law enforcement. Yes!! With each batch of notes I want to get close to how the final comic will look. This is quite different from my usual drawing style so training my brain do draw thos different... it's a process. Lol Glad ya liked it! And yeah the young <friggin 24> round lad is very lost and certain in himself at the same time.
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