Post by Systemcat on Nov 30, 2015 19:19:33 GMT -6
I know the voice actor is once in a while mispronouncing what I wrote in this. Could you guys please provide your thoughts about the matter?
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Inspector Gadget: And the Forge of Hate
Written by: Erin Weinstock
Prologue:
In the dawn of a new day, in the early months of 1991. Deep within a mountain named Everfrost which has been carved out to serve a purpose in Warland, Montana. Resides an organization named Scolex Enterprises, and it's employees are up to no good. They are dedicated to preforming deeds of evil, and are gearing up to make their work more convert & efficient. By way of plans put into action by some of it's workers. Who have yet to gain high ranking within it's sculpted walls of concrete, rock, metal, and plaster.
Where in the depths of this constructed den of wrong doing, the plans are happening are in a lab. Only two employees here feel the thrill of their work. Plus what they are trying to do. Their subjects however feel lightly otherwise. That while they do too work for Scolex Enterprises. They are the ones who will soon find out if the two doctor titled workers truly know what they are doing.
As the men and women of their boss's will imposed over them. By way of their neglecting to read the fine print of their work papers, signed. Await what is coming to them. The more serous of the two professional scientists readies the lab's equipment. For their experiment and takes not of his colleague. Doctor Focus not pleased by his younger equal with less experience on the job, glared at him.
Because of that to the actions being done by the co-worker. Doctor Claw does not look at all professional. At least though to a man of his standing, and more importantly to who he works for. In withholding of his feelings about his assistant. Doctor Focus calmly asked, "herd them into the containment area. We are almost ready to begin."
A demand which caught Doctor Claw off guard. In addition to also not at first realizing to whom, or what Doctor Focus was requesting of him. The pen of mewing kittens having had his attention better of the course of the last few minutes in the lab. Then the job at hand he'd been assigned to do. The debate in his mind resolving fast as he petted a fluffy gray striped tabby. Who in turn also rubbed against him. His colleague meant the men & women present, not the animals.
But as the gray striped tabby kitten pawed his hands. His focus didn't stay long with the words of, Doctor Focus. The other doctor in noting this. Knew his duly to his job, and his equal, still wet behind the ears. Grabbed away Doctor Claw from the litter of penned animals, and scowled him.
"You can't be a bad guy if you get too attached to the lab animals! Plus it doesn't reflect well on you either, Scolex is run by the mob, and gains it's funding from that! Remember that!" Cutting, and being snapped coldly to Doctor Claw, came the words from Doctor Focus.
Doctor Claw's reaction in pulling out of Doctor's Focus's grip. Came that of just a nod and a look back to the cats. Again noting the man's actions, Doctor Focus grabbed Doctor Claw's head, and snapped it in the direction of the waiting employees in the doorway of the room.
"Them, not the kittens!" Doctor Focus continued making his point to the younger man.
"Do we have to do this? I mean it's clear this is mad, Focus. What you two are trying to do with us." Asked the human lab rat, more into the room then the others grouped behind him. Nervous, and trying to control within him the grape juice drank a few hours before. He like those with him. Didn't feel keen on the idea about what fate was about to befall him. A good one he hoped, but his gut, and his bladder told him otherwise.
"First off, what you don't want the power this will give you? You will be the most untouchable hit men Scolex Enterprises has ever had! Plus you agreed to this in your contracts. Second off, never call my work mad!" Doctor Focus nearly growled at the men. As Doctor Claw moved to them to try, and force them to comply with their orders.
Knowing it was a battle that couldn't be won. They complied, and Doctor Claw watched them move on to a platform in readiness for the experiment. One employee, a friend of Doctor Claw, looked at him emotionless, while passing by him. The look while showing nothing in his facial features. Told Doctor Claw his thoughts. This was a mistake. But one that must be made, and heaven help him for that in their friendship, thought once had.
Once the employees not specialized in rank title. Like the doctors, all stood in waiting for science of unprecedented nature to be preformed. It began by both Doctor Focus and Claw, becoming dead serous in their work. Then beginning to run their specialized equipment attached to the platform. It, the experiment seemed well for a short time. But then a noted realization came soon that made the tide of favor held for the work, change.
Monitoring a computer of the latest high tech to the moment. Also ready to punch in commands to it to have it interact differently with it's surrounding equipment. Doctor Claw saw read outs on it's screen that didn't look right. Not expected, and far from being desired. A matter needing to be pointed out to Doctor Focus.
"Doctor, I think we should probably abort this."
"Nonsense continue," his foul mood continuing in reply from earlier. Doctor Focus, his mind made up that given this was new territory being walked upon here. That unpredictable things are inevitable to happen. A word of caution given by a co-worker less experienced. That isn't as professional as he? Not worth further, consideration of his words.
In compliance to his equal slash higher on the seniority latter co-worker, words of orders. Doctor Claw continued trying to further preform their experiment on the men and women on the platform. Looking up for one moment from the computer he'd been working with. He saw what his actions and the actions of Doctor Focus, combined were doing to them. The people, the lab rats, as Doctor Focus would call them. Their bodies now looked to be filling with light of rainbow shades. An impressive sight, but not one wanted.
With one key punched in number command, Doctor Claw tried to fix the problem. Than it, the problem erupted in a flash of light. That consumed the room for just mere moments.
The flash over, and body in pain, with blindness to his eyes. Doctor Focus asked, "my lab rats, how are you?!"
No answer came, and Doctor Claw, like that of his colleague in health, pain and blindness. Questioned the forced darkness of his surroundings as well. But with a different question. Also a discovery which showed no inflections in Doctor Focus's voice, although apparent in his throat, to his voice. A feeling of hoarseness when talking.
"Welker?" His friend, and lab rat to him & Doctor Focus, didn't answer the question. That being of status. How was he? Plus to the blindness of both men, Focus and Claw. Where was he?
"It's likely a form of radiation from the overload causing our pain and blindness! We need to leave here now!" Doctor Focus cried out feeling his way past his main work station in the lab into the area's more open space.
"I - have - one - task - I - need - to - do - first." Doctor Claw replied. with fear building in him over their situation. That also applied to others present not human.
"There's no time to turn off the equipment! This could kill us!" Doctor Focus snapped as he started to feel around to find his work companion.
Not paying attention to his colleague, Doctor Claw set to his task. That unlike Doctor Focus in his blind search to find him. Claw found what his task demanded of him faster. The feel of soft fur beneath one reaching out hand. Taking in the cat to his lab coat, that at it cuddling him. He knew without his sight. It was the cat he had at this point only mildly bonded with. Then proceeded to feel around for the rest of it's litter.
To no avail could he locate them, and further searching in desperation got halted in short time. Doctor Focus in his blind search found him. Then grabbing him by his scruff, the back of his coat. Pulled him out of the room with him. The kitten in Doctor Claw's coat pocket in tow with them.
Original written text:
---------------------------
Inspector Gadget: And the Forge of Hate
Written by: Erin Weinstock
Prologue:
In the dawn of a new day, in the early months of 1991. Deep within a mountain named Everfrost which has been carved out to serve a purpose in Warland, Montana. Resides an organization named Scolex Enterprises, and it's employees are up to no good. They are dedicated to preforming deeds of evil, and are gearing up to make their work more convert & efficient. By way of plans put into action by some of it's workers. Who have yet to gain high ranking within it's sculpted walls of concrete, rock, metal, and plaster.
Where in the depths of this constructed den of wrong doing, the plans are happening are in a lab. Only two employees here feel the thrill of their work. Plus what they are trying to do. Their subjects however feel lightly otherwise. That while they do too work for Scolex Enterprises. They are the ones who will soon find out if the two doctor titled workers truly know what they are doing.
As the men and women of their boss's will imposed over them. By way of their neglecting to read the fine print of their work papers, signed. Await what is coming to them. The more serous of the two professional scientists readies the lab's equipment. For their experiment and takes not of his colleague. Doctor Focus not pleased by his younger equal with less experience on the job, glared at him.
Because of that to the actions being done by the co-worker. Doctor Claw does not look at all professional. At least though to a man of his standing, and more importantly to who he works for. In withholding of his feelings about his assistant. Doctor Focus calmly asked, "herd them into the containment area. We are almost ready to begin."
A demand which caught Doctor Claw off guard. In addition to also not at first realizing to whom, or what Doctor Focus was requesting of him. The pen of mewing kittens having had his attention better of the course of the last few minutes in the lab. Then the job at hand he'd been assigned to do. The debate in his mind resolving fast as he petted a fluffy gray striped tabby. Who in turn also rubbed against him. His colleague meant the men & women present, not the animals.
But as the gray striped tabby kitten pawed his hands. His focus didn't stay long with the words of, Doctor Focus. The other doctor in noting this. Knew his duly to his job, and his equal, still wet behind the ears. Grabbed away Doctor Claw from the litter of penned animals, and scowled him.
"You can't be a bad guy if you get too attached to the lab animals! Plus it doesn't reflect well on you either, Scolex is run by the mob, and gains it's funding from that! Remember that!" Cutting, and being snapped coldly to Doctor Claw, came the words from Doctor Focus.
Doctor Claw's reaction in pulling out of Doctor's Focus's grip. Came that of just a nod and a look back to the cats. Again noting the man's actions, Doctor Focus grabbed Doctor Claw's head, and snapped it in the direction of the waiting employees in the doorway of the room.
"Them, not the kittens!" Doctor Focus continued making his point to the younger man.
"Do we have to do this? I mean it's clear this is mad, Focus. What you two are trying to do with us." Asked the human lab rat, more into the room then the others grouped behind him. Nervous, and trying to control within him the grape juice drank a few hours before. He like those with him. Didn't feel keen on the idea about what fate was about to befall him. A good one he hoped, but his gut, and his bladder told him otherwise.
"First off, what you don't want the power this will give you? You will be the most untouchable hit men Scolex Enterprises has ever had! Plus you agreed to this in your contracts. Second off, never call my work mad!" Doctor Focus nearly growled at the men. As Doctor Claw moved to them to try, and force them to comply with their orders.
Knowing it was a battle that couldn't be won. They complied, and Doctor Claw watched them move on to a platform in readiness for the experiment. One employee, a friend of Doctor Claw, looked at him emotionless, while passing by him. The look while showing nothing in his facial features. Told Doctor Claw his thoughts. This was a mistake. But one that must be made, and heaven help him for that in their friendship, thought once had.
Once the employees not specialized in rank title. Like the doctors, all stood in waiting for science of unprecedented nature to be preformed. It began by both Doctor Focus and Claw, becoming dead serous in their work. Then beginning to run their specialized equipment attached to the platform. It, the experiment seemed well for a short time. But then a noted realization came soon that made the tide of favor held for the work, change.
Monitoring a computer of the latest high tech to the moment. Also ready to punch in commands to it to have it interact differently with it's surrounding equipment. Doctor Claw saw read outs on it's screen that didn't look right. Not expected, and far from being desired. A matter needing to be pointed out to Doctor Focus.
"Doctor, I think we should probably abort this."
"Nonsense continue," his foul mood continuing in reply from earlier. Doctor Focus, his mind made up that given this was new territory being walked upon here. That unpredictable things are inevitable to happen. A word of caution given by a co-worker less experienced. That isn't as professional as he? Not worth further, consideration of his words.
In compliance to his equal slash higher on the seniority latter co-worker, words of orders. Doctor Claw continued trying to further preform their experiment on the men and women on the platform. Looking up for one moment from the computer he'd been working with. He saw what his actions and the actions of Doctor Focus, combined were doing to them. The people, the lab rats, as Doctor Focus would call them. Their bodies now looked to be filling with light of rainbow shades. An impressive sight, but not one wanted.
With one key punched in number command, Doctor Claw tried to fix the problem. Than it, the problem erupted in a flash of light. That consumed the room for just mere moments.
The flash over, and body in pain, with blindness to his eyes. Doctor Focus asked, "my lab rats, how are you?!"
No answer came, and Doctor Claw, like that of his colleague in health, pain and blindness. Questioned the forced darkness of his surroundings as well. But with a different question. Also a discovery which showed no inflections in Doctor Focus's voice, although apparent in his throat, to his voice. A feeling of hoarseness when talking.
"Welker?" His friend, and lab rat to him & Doctor Focus, didn't answer the question. That being of status. How was he? Plus to the blindness of both men, Focus and Claw. Where was he?
"It's likely a form of radiation from the overload causing our pain and blindness! We need to leave here now!" Doctor Focus cried out feeling his way past his main work station in the lab into the area's more open space.
"I - have - one - task - I - need - to - do - first." Doctor Claw replied. with fear building in him over their situation. That also applied to others present not human.
"There's no time to turn off the equipment! This could kill us!" Doctor Focus snapped as he started to feel around to find his work companion.
Not paying attention to his colleague, Doctor Claw set to his task. That unlike Doctor Focus in his blind search to find him. Claw found what his task demanded of him faster. The feel of soft fur beneath one reaching out hand. Taking in the cat to his lab coat, that at it cuddling him. He knew without his sight. It was the cat he had at this point only mildly bonded with. Then proceeded to feel around for the rest of it's litter.
To no avail could he locate them, and further searching in desperation got halted in short time. Doctor Focus in his blind search found him. Then grabbing him by his scruff, the back of his coat. Pulled him out of the room with him. The kitten in Doctor Claw's coat pocket in tow with them.