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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2016 18:31:37 GMT -6
I think you tackled that subject very well of custody handling over Penny. Her viewpoint, Gadget's viewpoint, .. Mrs. Nesbit .. piss off lady. ( Yeah, not John's vocalized words, but I could almost picture him thinking that. ) Maybe thinking, but my Gadget's too friendly a person to say it out loud. It takes a whole heck of a lot to get him riled up, but when you do, you're deader than dead. Penny, on the other hand, is another matter. I'm sure she would have used much harsher words had she not been a five year old currently in the care of one of the most family friendly men on the face of the planet.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2016 5:21:07 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Apr 8, 2016 6:45:38 GMT -6
Read it..loved it..from beginning to end! And I left you a little review on fanfiction.net!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2016 6:54:26 GMT -6
Read it..loved it..from beginning to end! And I left you a little review on fanfiction.net! Thanks! Hop to see you for ReInitiated!
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Apr 8, 2016 10:50:15 GMT -6
Read it..loved it..from beginning to end! And I left you a little review on fanfiction.net! Thanks! Hop to see you for ReInitiated! You know it!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2016 10:56:53 GMT -6
Thanks! Hop to see you for ReInitiated! You know it! My one warning is that you seem to like to review when a story is finished. That won't be for a loooonnng time. (Look at Dreamland Chronicles for an idea of how long ReInitiated will be.)
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Apr 8, 2016 11:05:33 GMT -6
You know it! My one warning is that you seem to like to review when a story is finished. That won't be for a loooonnng time. (Look at Dreamland Chronicles for an idea of how long ReInitiated will be.) Well if that's the case, I'll just have to leave a little review after every chapter instead!
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 13, 2016 9:04:25 GMT -6
Ok, this is the second half of the review. I guess I feel it best said here why I thought things in that latest chapter were going to go further on a topic. On Gadget and partners. Am I right to assume Agent Heather is going to be introduced in the next story? I remember you mentioning her in a PM when we talked about that round robin idea.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2016 9:53:49 GMT -6
Ok, this is the second half of the review. I guess I feel it best said here why I thought things in that latest chapter were going to go further on a topic. On Gadget and partners. Am I right to assume Agent Heather is going to be introduced in the next story? I remember you mentioning her in a PM when we talked about that round robin idea. Yeah, she's still going to appear, but there are going to be a lot of developments in the first couple of chapters that I can't give away here. There will be a lot more I can explain when ReInitiated starts, including why she doesn't appear here. The only thing that I can mention is her age: as of this last chapter, Heather is only 17, so she's not working for WOMP quite yet.
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