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Post by Deleted on Jun 8, 2016 8:23:35 GMT -6
I just caught up with the rest of your story so far Copter, and I have to say how much I am greatly enjoying it! Â Keep up the good work! I left you some reviews as well! Thanks! I'm so honored you are enjoying it! PS, I'll have a new chapter up tomorrow.
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 8, 2016 9:19:08 GMT -6
I just caught up with the rest of your story so far Copter, and I have to say how much I am greatly enjoying it! Keep up the good work! I left you some reviews as well! Thanks! I'm so honored you are enjoying it! PS, I'll have a new chapter up tomorrow. Awesome! ....excuse me as I now count down the minutes!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2016 6:35:14 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 9, 2016 9:49:38 GMT -6
Just read it! Fantastic and left you a widdle review!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2016 10:02:26 GMT -6
Just read it! Fantastic and left you a widdle review! Got it! Thanks!
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 9, 2016 13:47:30 GMT -6
Just read it! Fantastic and left you a widdle review! Got it! Thanks! Your welcome!
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Post by Systemcat on Jun 9, 2016 15:26:29 GMT -6
This chapter really felt like it was meant for character development. It moved, but not by much. Still good though *thumbs up*. The cliffhanger it has at it's end ..you know how to make your audience want more.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 9, 2016 16:02:58 GMT -6
This chapter really felt like it was meant for character development. It moved, but not by much. Still good though *thumbs up*. The cliffhanger it has at it's end ..you know how to make your audience want more. Yeah, it was a slower episode. It's just that was the eye of the storm. Starting next week, muck will be hitting the fan.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2016 7:26:05 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 16, 2016 10:26:08 GMT -6
Omg! That was such a good chapter! It had me at the end of my seat at the end! Can't wait until next week!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 16, 2016 10:30:36 GMT -6
Omg! That was such a good chapter! It had me at the end of my seat at the end! Can't wait until next week! I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by Systemcat on Jun 19, 2016 14:19:37 GMT -6
A gaggle of robot animals on your side a gaggle of cyborg animals on my side. Lets make a zoo! Just kidding, but I do think that expansion is a neat addition in your story ( yes, I'm aware a couple got introduced earlier in the story ).
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2016 15:16:08 GMT -6
A gaggle of robot animals on your side a gaggle of cyborg animals on my side. Lets make a zoo! Just kidding, but I do think that expansion is a neat addition in your story ( yes, I'm aware a couple got introduced earlier in the story ). Thanks! Honestly, I got the idea for the G-Units from G-9 in Gadget Boy and Heather. Since there was a G-9, why not G's 1-8 and a G-10. We'll learn more about G-11 and G-12 later.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2016 7:51:21 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jun 23, 2016 14:24:26 GMT -6
Read it, loved it, reviewed it! Seriously I'm...liked hooked now....
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