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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2016 18:08:17 GMT -6
My entire knowledge of Star Trek is pretty much limited to the Reboot series, Wrath of Kahn to Journey Home movies, and a scant knowledge of The Next Generation I got from reading about it. Thus, I have never watched, or even read about, Star Treck Enterprise. It is rather freaky how similar in concept that plot is to what I have. If you don't mind me asking, what animated movie was it? I'd rather not say. If you've seen the film or plan to watch it. Well if you thought of part of it's plot and tried to layer that idea on to Iron and Steel, that would act like a spoiler because you'd figure out a mystery easily. Ah, I see. Alright then.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2016 7:18:04 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jul 21, 2016 9:39:38 GMT -6
Read it and left a review! So exciting! Gadget was probably my single most favorite part of the whole chapter! Question, his shield he produced. Is it similar to Reinhart's from the game Overwatch? Here's a picture, incase you don't know what I mean. -his view. -opponent view.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2016 10:28:01 GMT -6
Read it and left a review! So exciting! Gadget was probably my single most favorite part of the whole chapter! Question, his shield he produced. Is it similar to Reinhart's from the game Overwatch? Here's a picture, incase you don't know what I mean. View Attachment -his view. View Attachment -opponent view. I've never played Overwatch before, but, yeah, that does look like what I imagined.
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jul 21, 2016 11:06:49 GMT -6
Read it and left a review! So exciting! Gadget was probably my single most favorite part of the whole chapter! Question, his shield he produced. Is it similar to Reinhart's from the game Overwatch? Here's a picture, incase you don't know what I mean. -his view. -opponent view. I've never played Overwatch before, but, yeah, that does look like what I imagined. Oh, that's pretty cool then! I never played the game either, my husband has it though and he plays it alllllll the time! That's how I know of it. The moment Gadget generated his shield and advanced towards his targets with Brain in tow, I immediately thought of Reinheart. He's a tank character and you pretty much use him the same way when his shield is out. And protect your team. His shield is impenetrable to projectiles, but weakens with each attack until it shatters. Then you have to wait for a cool down period until you can use it again.
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Post by Systemcat on Jul 22, 2016 9:56:50 GMT -6
I'd been off & on wondering for a while if MAD's original villains & thugs were very going to return and now this chapter has delivered that answer.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2016 10:35:23 GMT -6
I'd been off & on wondering for a while if MAD's original villains & thugs were very going to return and now this chapter has delivered that answer. Yep. I did this with my Kirby series, too. I don't like OC's being more serious or powerful than the canon characters, so even if one proves to be a threat, they will be overshadowed by the canon counterparts. I had been hinting that the main MAD group would be coming back. Talon considered being bossed around by non-original MAD members to be a disgrace and Claw's lieutenants weren't about to fold to anyone who hasn't proved themselves. Thus, they allowed Freymore and Deboir to act as a distraction to break the majority of the True MAD out of the Cistern and bring Claw back into power.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2016 7:18:48 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jul 28, 2016 11:37:31 GMT -6
Read it and reviewed! So very good, I enjoyed it a whole lot! Can't wait until next time!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2016 11:44:44 GMT -6
Read it and reviewed! So very good, I enjoyed it a whole lot! Can't wait until next time! I'm glad you liked it. As a small tidbit, this was actually the cleaned up version of the chapter. The original end featured Freymore's execution on screen, but I felt I'd have to bump the rating to M if I kept it, so I move it off screen. His fate remained the same, though.
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jul 28, 2016 12:48:44 GMT -6
Read it and reviewed! So very good, I enjoyed it a whole lot! Can't wait until next time! I'm glad you liked it. As a small tidbit, this was actually the cleaned up version of the chapter. The original end featured Freymore's execution on screen, but I felt I'd have to bump the rating to M if I kept it, so I move it off screen. His fate remained the same, though. Ohhhhhh.....I would 'loved' to read that! I'm kinda demented that way! But still, I'm just soooooo glad that he ummm suffered such an unfortunate accident! ...it brings a tear or two to my eye!.....bastard soooooo deserved it!!! *whistles and walks away*
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2016 14:48:09 GMT -6
I'm glad you liked it. As a small tidbit, this was actually the cleaned up version of the chapter. The original end featured Freymore's execution on screen, but I felt I'd have to bump the rating to M if I kept it, so I move it off screen. His fate remained the same, though. Ohhhhhh.....I would 'loved' to read that! I'm kinda demented that way! But still, I'm just soooooo glad that he ummm suffered such an unfortunate accident! ...it brings a tear or two to my eye!.....bastard soooooo deserved it!!! *whistles and walks away* Oohh, I so would have kept that scene if I wasn't 100% sure FF.net would have given me a strike for it. In case you are wondering, he got eaten by those Chimera. That's why they didn't come back with their masters.
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Jul 28, 2016 16:03:08 GMT -6
Ohhhhhh.....I would 'loved' to read that! I'm kinda demented that way! But still, I'm just soooooo glad that he ummm suffered such an unfortunate accident! ...it brings a tear or two to my eye!.....bastard soooooo deserved it!!! *whistles and walks away* Oohh, I so would have kept that scene if I wasn't 100% sure FF.net would have given me a strike for it. In case you are wondering, he got eaten by those Chimera. That's why they didn't come back with their masters. I think you would have been okay, to be honest. I've read some rather questionable stuff on their at times... ..heh,heh..anyway, I knew he got eaten by those...lovely little creatures!! Such good widdle pets they be!!! Mmmmmm...crunchy!!!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2016 16:40:49 GMT -6
Oohh, I so would have kept that scene if I wasn't 100% sure FF.net would have given me a strike for it. In case you are wondering, he got eaten by those Chimera. That's why they didn't come back with their masters. I think you would have been okay, to be honest. I've read some rather questionable stuff on their at times... ..heh,heh..anyway, I knew he got eaten by those...lovely little creatures!! Such good widdle pets they be!!! Mmmmmm...crunchy!!! Chimera hold loyalty to one person and one person only. That would be their master, who they will serve to the death. However, anyone else is at best an annoyance and at worst a snack. Even Brain isn't 100% free of this. Sure, he's never going to eat someone, and he does like certain people, but he's got very little patience for stupidity and the only person he completely respects and listens to is Penny.
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Post by Systemcat on Jul 30, 2016 8:48:35 GMT -6
This section Gadget in WOMP really felt like his canon versions on his mistakes with Brain when the dog was being talked about. I loved it when especially he thought Brain had Chimera fleas. Also I think it's interesting we both decided upon the same kind of thug or grunt pairing for story usage. Although you likely didn't make the IDing mistake I did. I'm reffing to Lenny who I thought was Fred by incorrect wording given to me from another fan once. Due to that I kept saying Louis was in fact Lenny for a while then when after finally seeing concept art, I learned he was modeled from Fred.
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