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Post by PolarStar on May 22, 2016 13:31:10 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2016 14:25:39 GMT -6
Interesting start. I'm intrigued to see where things go.
Also, nice shout out to Beauty and the Beast.
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Post by PolarStar on May 22, 2016 15:46:44 GMT -6
Interesting start. I'm intrigued to see where things go. Also, nice shout out to Beauty and the Beast. Thank you. I'll post the two chapters still today.
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Post by PolarStar on May 22, 2016 17:16:33 GMT -6
First and second chapters on!
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2016 20:15:51 GMT -6
First and second chapters on! Read them both and commented. I have to hazard to guess, you seem to be replacing the Bradfords with Professor Slickstein and Penny's parents.
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Post by gizmo2015 on May 22, 2016 22:55:50 GMT -6
love it
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Post by PolarStar on May 23, 2016 3:49:07 GMT -6
First and second chapters on! Read them both and commented. I have to hazard to guess, you seem to be replacing the Bradfords with Professor Slickstein and Penny's parents. Yes. I actually didn't mention it on the description but I want to keep the same harmony of the 80's version and take away some stuff from the Disney movie. I know a lot of you like Brenda but she's not going to appear in this story.
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Post by PolarStar on May 23, 2016 3:49:22 GMT -6
love it thank you
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Post by PolarStar on May 23, 2016 8:37:49 GMT -6
Third chapter on!
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Post by Deleted on May 23, 2016 10:32:42 GMT -6
Times are tough for poor John right now.
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Post by PolarStar on May 23, 2016 10:53:54 GMT -6
Times are tough for poor John right now. Yes
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Post by PolarStar on May 25, 2016 10:44:58 GMT -6
Fourth chapter done!
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Post by Deleted on May 25, 2016 10:58:05 GMT -6
And now the Gadgetmobile is under way!
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Post by gizmo2015 on May 25, 2016 15:46:58 GMT -6
sweet
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Post by PolarStar on May 27, 2016 16:03:04 GMT -6
Fifth chapter done!
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