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Post by Systemcat on Feb 18, 2016 17:20:18 GMT -6
Just got through what you've added since the last time I read the story. Poor Penny, but I think she's going to emotionally recover ok. Frank Dollar meet Daniel Dollar. *Sorry I couldn't resist that.* Just wondering which authors influence your writing style for story telling flow? Eheh Sorry for asking this, but could explain your question a little better? Just so I can understand so I can answer to it You style which you also used to a degree with your last story too. Of a portion of the story taking place in a flashback and then having it switch to present day. This story has that happening a lot more prominently. Years ago - present - years ago - present. Is this way of story telling used by some author you like that their style is influencing your work? If so who is that author or authors?
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 18, 2016 19:35:40 GMT -6
Eheh Sorry for asking this, but could explain your question a little better? Just so I can understand so I can answer to it You style which you also used to a degree with your last story too. Of a portion of the story taking place in a flashback and then having it switch to present day. This story has that happening a lot more prominently. Years ago - present - years ago - present. Is this way of story telling used by some author you like that their style is influencing your work? If so who is that author or authors? Oh! In that case no. I actually was with an idea of making two stories so I decided to write both, turning them into different parts. I don't have an author in general since most of my inspiration comes from a lot of animation and comics.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 18, 2016 19:36:36 GMT -6
Chapter III done!
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 18, 2016 19:58:46 GMT -6
sweet
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Post by blueowl98 on Feb 18, 2016 20:20:14 GMT -6
Polar, don't listen to CreativeCuquiLu, your fanfics are great. For her to just plainly say they aren't, well, that's her opinion, and she should just keep it to herself. If your making the bully upset, you must be doing something right. Don't stop with those stories, girl!
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 19, 2016 4:44:12 GMT -6
Polar, don't listen to CreativeCuquiLu, your fanfics are great. For her to just plainly say they aren't, well, that's her opinion, and she should just keep it to herself. If your making the bully upset, you must be doing something right. Don't stop with those stories, girl! Thank you, gioj! I actually surpassed that situation and I also, even so I got a little pissed, never decided to give up on doing the things I like just because of her stupidity.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 19, 2016 16:38:50 GMT -6
Memory IV done!
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Post by Systemcat on Feb 19, 2016 22:00:31 GMT -6
Cats out of the bag, owe didn't peg that for a way for Doctor Claw to go at Gadget. But at least Quimby in the flashback could cheer him up ( Yes, I'm aware the events aren't connected. )
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 20, 2016 3:31:40 GMT -6
Nice word pun. X3
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 26, 2016 16:11:21 GMT -6
Sorry for the wait. Chapter IV is on!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 26, 2016 16:19:22 GMT -6
Not bad. Things are getting interesting.
The only thing is there was several times you wrote "sheer" when you meant "cheer." Just thought I'd mention.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 26, 2016 16:31:17 GMT -6
Not bad. Things are getting interesting. The only thing is there was several times you wrote "sheer" when you meant "cheer." Just thought I'd mention. Ups, have to correct that then
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 28, 2016 14:09:20 GMT -6
Memory V is on
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Post by gadgetfan86 on Feb 29, 2016 12:52:21 GMT -6
Cool and interesting fic here , that a totally different way of dr claw going againat the gadget family/ Some of gadgets and penny arugments reminds of Gosalyn mallard and Darkwing and her reasons for wanting to become a hero. infb fact some of gadget relationship with penny is also simlar with Gosalyn and darkwing relationsip
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 29, 2016 13:18:38 GMT -6
Cool and interesting fic here , that a totally different way of dr claw going againat the gadget family/ Some of gadgets and penny arugments reminds of Gosalyn mallard and Darkwing and her reasons for wanting to become a hero. infb fact some of gadget relationship with penny is also simlar with Gosalyn and darkwing relationsip Thanks! Well I haven't watched Darkwing Duck lately, but yes, both series has some similarities.
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