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Post by PolarStar on Feb 16, 2016 17:35:16 GMT -6
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 16, 2016 18:44:11 GMT -6
First chapter memory on!
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 16, 2016 18:51:31 GMT -6
I will check this out now.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 17, 2016 9:59:39 GMT -6
Chapter one is on!
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 17, 2016 10:06:38 GMT -6
sweet
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Post by Systemcat on Feb 17, 2016 10:53:25 GMT -6
I just went through all you've put up so far. Already I see this is being consistent with the timeline you made in the second story you wrote. And with what is brought up in the first chapter, I have a bad feeling about what's going to happen to take a cue from Penny's chat with from Brain & Doctor Claw's next actions unsaid.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 17, 2016 11:08:42 GMT -6
I just went through all you've put up so far. Already I see this is being consistent with the timeline you made in the second story you wrote. And with what is brought up in the first chapter, I have a bad feeling about what's going to happen to take a cue from Penny's chat with from Brain & Doctor Claw's next actions unsaid. Yes, it's a sort of a timeline. Well, I already gave some spoilers with my fan arts so who knows what might going to happen on the next chapters.
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 17, 2016 12:05:39 GMT -6
I just went through all you've put up so far. Already I see this is being consistent with the timeline you made in the second story you wrote. And with what is brought up in the first chapter, I have a bad feeling about what's going to happen to take a cue from Penny's chat with from Brain & Doctor Claw's next actions unsaid. Yes, it's a sort of a timeline. Well, I already gave some spoilers with my fan arts so who knows what might going to happen on the next chapters. keep it coming.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 17, 2016 13:56:16 GMT -6
Memory II on!
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 17, 2016 14:22:55 GMT -6
I just looked at it now.
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 17, 2016 19:08:27 GMT -6
Chapter two is done!
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 18, 2016 11:18:31 GMT -6
Memory III done!
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Post by gizmo2015 on Feb 18, 2016 12:35:28 GMT -6
sweet
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Post by Systemcat on Feb 18, 2016 17:05:42 GMT -6
Just got through what you've added since the last time I read the story. Poor Penny, but I think she's going to emotionally recover ok. Frank Dollar meet Daniel Dollar. *Sorry I couldn't resist that.* Just wondering which authors influence your writing style for story telling flow?
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Post by PolarStar on Feb 18, 2016 17:09:16 GMT -6
Just got through what you've added since the last time I read the story. Poor Penny, but I think she's going to emotionally recover ok. Frank Dollar meet Daniel Dollar. *Sorry I couldn't resist that.* Just wondering which authors influence your writing style for story telling flow? Eheh Sorry for asking this, but could explain your question a little better? Just so I can understand so I can answer to it
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