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Post by PolarStar on Mar 1, 2016 17:34:35 GMT -6
Chapter V is on!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2016 17:56:40 GMT -6
Uh oh! This isn't good!
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Post by Systemcat on Mar 1, 2016 18:16:31 GMT -6
This covers the last two chapters posted.
Man when John gets pissed he gets pissed! I wonder with him quitting the police force what's going to come of that. Brain with his cheer up cupcakes made for an interesting mental image. If John is aware in this version Capeman is a moron, that's the only explanation I can think of why Gadget didn't tear into him for the "tact" used in referring to Sophie's status. On the flashback, that really connected back to your last story in mention of Jule's death, the afterwards. Poor Frank on John's reaction to hearing of the coming marriage, but he took it rather well.
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Post by Systemcat on Mar 1, 2016 18:33:23 GMT -6
Oop! I just noticed I missed a chapter ...starts to read.
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Post by Systemcat on Mar 1, 2016 18:52:00 GMT -6
That's a cliffhanger!
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 2, 2016 4:12:14 GMT -6
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 3, 2016 8:47:36 GMT -6
Memory VI done! And prepare the tissues 'cause this chapter will make you tear up.
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 3, 2016 12:48:20 GMT -6
Finished Chapter VI now!
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Mar 3, 2016 15:03:07 GMT -6
Finished Chapter VI now! Girl you on a roll today! Well alight!!
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 3, 2016 15:09:39 GMT -6
Finished Chapter VI now! Girl you on a roll today! Well alight!! Eheh
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 4, 2016 16:47:46 GMT -6
Memory VII done!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 4, 2016 17:53:55 GMT -6
What is your age gap between Gadget and Sophie?
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 5, 2016 3:46:22 GMT -6
What is your age gap between Gadget and Sophie? Two years old of difference.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 5, 2016 6:48:31 GMT -6
What is your age gap between Gadget and Sophie? Two years old of difference. Cool. Thanks!
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Post by PolarStar on Mar 5, 2016 7:16:02 GMT -6
Two years old of difference. Cool. Thanks! No problem
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