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Post by Systemcat on Apr 19, 2016 17:31:12 GMT -6
Page 65 Annie's not exactly thrilled with her job, is she. Also, I recently watch the Gadget Classic episode with Professor Venom in it. You changed him up quite a bit, didn't you? No, she isn't. Yes, the only things I kept intact with him are controlling snakes and the "sss" in his speaking". Plus even then it's a higher note in this he uses robotic snakes rather than live ones. Something I think I should note here going back to the prose stories. I'm about to update story two for grammar connection reasons, nothing more. This update might place it with the more recent stories in the IG section even through it hasn't had anything truly noteworthy changed about it. Also for this series I just altered page 64. This change only effects appearance for some panels.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2016 21:03:38 GMT -6
Page 67
Recently killed muskrat. Yummy.
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 21, 2016 21:49:33 GMT -6
Page 67 Recently killed muskrat. Yummy. I figure it makes sense to write Annie knows how to hunt and prepare animals shes killed.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2016 16:18:07 GMT -6
Page Sixty Eight
As something that come to my mind, how many Cyborg animal are there, and is MAD still making them?
I ask because my MAD has animal interest, too, but in a very different manner.
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 23, 2016 16:41:04 GMT -6
Page Sixty Eight As something that come to my mind, how many Cyborg animal are there, and is MAD still making them? I ask because my MAD has animal interest, too, but in a very different manner. I'm leaving it as unspecified how many MAD has made. As for if the organization is still making them, not at this current moment. Right now their main focus is simply rebuilding, gaining a true headquarters again. ( The hunt to kills off two of it's own agents is very much a piece of side business. ) MAD turned to making agent cyborg animals when genetic altered of animals failed to live up to expected par.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2016 16:52:40 GMT -6
Page Sixty Eight As something that come to my mind, how many Cyborg animal are there, and is MAD still making them? I ask because my MAD has animal interest, too, but in a very different manner. I'm leaving it as unspecified how many MAD has made. As for if the organization is still making them, not at this current moment. Right now their main focus is simply rebuilding, gaining a true headquarters again. ( The hunt to kills off two of it's own agents is very much a piece of side business. ) MAD turned to making agent cyborg animals when genetic altered of animals failed to live up to expected par. Spoiler: I veer more into genetic altering, but in a way I've never seen done before. All I can say is this post will be the biggest hint as to why I posted those videos about grasshopper mice.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 25, 2016 19:53:12 GMT -6
Page 69
Interesting interpretation. I've never seen the MAD agents as mercenaries for hire.
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 25, 2016 20:00:24 GMT -6
Page 69 Interesting interpretation. I've never seen the MAD agents as mercenaries for hire. You hit it right on the nose with your comment on DA, but here I'm not sure what you're meaning?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 25, 2016 20:14:43 GMT -6
Page 69 Interesting interpretation. I've never seen the MAD agents as mercenaries for hire. You hit it right on the nose with your comment on DA, but here I'm not sure what you're meaning? His comment about the money made me think he was mercenary. Upon rereading, I realized he meant to Claw, not from him.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2016 12:29:06 GMT -6
Page seventy
That wasn't too hard to guess. How many people can fly on their own power?
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 27, 2016 12:58:17 GMT -6
Page seventy That wasn't too hard to guess. How many people can fly on their own power? Yeah, Bruce figured it out. So did Finch even though he wasn't aware at first he was meeting Penny.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 28, 2016 15:41:06 GMT -6
Page 71 I had to laugh how Finch yelled not to wake him, like that would keep a phone from ringing.
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 28, 2016 15:43:14 GMT -6
Page 71 I had to laugh how Finch yelled not to wake him, like that would keep a phone from ringing. Yeah, MAD agents aren't the most stable minded people.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2016 17:18:50 GMT -6
Page 72
So, with the cyborg animals, are they distinct to an agent, or does MAD consider them assignment tools?
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Post by Systemcat on Apr 29, 2016 18:32:38 GMT -6
Page 72 So, with the cyborg animals, are they distinct to an agent, or does MAD consider them assignment tools? This goes three ways. . Distinct to some agents: This is shown with Amazon Annie on her ownership of Tanner. . Tools: The break-in gang used on Gadget's house back in story one. Also the currently being used Tailless in committing robberies. . Pets: Bruce's ownership of Thumper. These barriers are crossed around for some agents. - Tanner is assigned to Annie, but at the same time is a tool. - Thumper is more a pet, but is used some times as a tool.
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