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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2016 16:21:41 GMT -6
This section Gadget in WOMP really felt like his canon versions on his mistakes with Brain when the dog was being talked about. I loved it when especially he thought Brain had Chimera fleas. Also I think it's interesting we both decided upon the same kind of thug or grunt pairing for story usage. Although you likely didn't make the IDing mistake I did. I'm reffing to Lenny who I thought was Fred by incorrect wording given to me from another fan once. Due to that I kept saying Louis was in fact Lenny for a while then when after finally seeing concept art, I learned he was modeled from Fred. Gadget just could not get it on his own that Brain was a chimera, so he used the connection to blood to the best of his abilities. He's really sweet but kind of airheaded, and we wouldn't have him any other way. Honestly, the similarities were unintentional. I was definitely going to use Dick in the story, but I really wasn't sure which big grunt I wanted to go with. It wasn't until I realized that I kind of killed off Fred in Initiation that I decided on Lenny. Within the story, however, my renditions are much less sympathetic than Terry and Louis. Also, Dick has never had a relationship with Anna, though an ex-girlfriend does come up, but I can't say too much about her now.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2016 8:07:16 GMT -6
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Post by Systemcat on Aug 11, 2016 12:48:16 GMT -6
So much for thinking Fidget & Digit were a one time note. Also cute presentation of the Gadgetmobile in having Link there in it's introduction. Also I wonder besides us, how many other fan fic writers have noted what the original is based with ( I'm discounting of course the sci fi element of it's the 2085 model )?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2016 13:06:41 GMT -6
So much for thinking Fidget & Digit were a one time note. Also cute presentation of the Gadgetmobile in having Link there in it's introduction. Also I wonder besides us, how many other fan fic writers have noted what the original is based with ( I'm discounting of course the sci fi element of it's the 2085 model )? Thanks! I wanted to have Linc be the first one to speak up for that reason. I really haven't mentioned the connection to the 1999 Gadgetmobile yet, so I'm nor sure if anyone else has noted the "Lincoln" connection.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2016 7:43:51 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Aug 25, 2016 11:18:08 GMT -6
Awesome! Read and reviewed!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2016 11:29:25 GMT -6
Awesome! Read and reviewed! Glad you liked it!
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Post by Systemcat on Aug 27, 2016 8:46:58 GMT -6
Clever on how the bots picked their names. On Penny, I'm not sure what to say except I'm very intrigued to see what comes of that.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 27, 2016 11:51:46 GMT -6
Clever on how the bots picked their names. On Penny, I'm not sure what to say except I'm very intrigued to see what comes of that. I wanted to have some explanation for the names, and pretty much coming up with them on the spot would explain the rhyming thing. All I can say is that Penny was effected by DElPHI in a rather permanent way, not all of which is beneficial.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 8, 2016 7:18:51 GMT -6
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Post by eyesofthephasm on Sept 8, 2016 10:01:18 GMT -6
Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 8, 2016 10:26:19 GMT -6
Awesome chapter! Keep up the good work! Thanks!
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Post by Systemcat on Sept 9, 2016 10:28:42 GMT -6
I thought Gadget's perception of an explosion being a "snow geyser" was cute. What he stumbles on to by mistake, the grunt's hang out. That was rich. I can't wait for the next chapter to read how he gets out of that alive.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 9, 2016 13:17:39 GMT -6
I thought Gadget's perception of an explosion being a "snow geyser" was cute. What he stumbles on to by mistake, the grunt's hang out. That was rich. I can't wait for the next chapter to read how he gets out of that alive. I'll admit, one of the most fun things about this series is getting into Gadget's head and working out how he thinks. He isn't random and does have a rhyme and reason for the way he thinks. Now, whether or not that reason makes sense is another matter. Yeah, he tends to trip right into trouble. As for how he'll get out of this, well, the next chapter should shed some light on it.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2016 8:00:32 GMT -6
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